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November 13, 2006
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Canon EOS-1DS 1/250 second F/8.0 16 mm 100 Oct 26, 2006, 11:16:00 AM Share
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"One should either be a work of art, or wear a work of art." (Oscar Wilde)
As you asked for "Advanced critique" I would add that the top light would have added warmth had it been turned on, you could have shot from a little lower position accenting the girls dominance, and probably not use such a large box for the light, making it more directional.
I also think a slower shutter speed (and/or larger f-stop) would have made the sunlight coming in through the window stronger in comparison with the main exposure, which would have looked more natural!
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